Monday, October 6, 2008

chapter 1 the start

you remember me, Bob and my Friend Dave we are both in this new book and a few new guys!okay now here's how it started first, last time i got $100.00 dollars so i got a big big big big big big big place and my Friend Dave comes too it. all of a suddenly we heard a thump outside we ran too the door, *creak* we opened a door and outside we saw a car that crashed we were thinking is this a start of a new mystery? we went too the car he was still alive so we went too the police station they said nothing was wrong, was it? We were not there or did he just crash? so we went back too my place and then we seen a letter on my door it said; "go away or some thing bad is going to happen! So we got a little tiny bit scared but were thinking we are supposed too figure this out, so we went to the guy that crashed his name was "Nick" so we ask him how he crashed so then he said "i have too go" so then Dave went too the door don't go said bob how did you crash? so nick said well this guy said if i don't crash then he will do some thing bad so then we ask what was his name nick said he did not tell me but his old hide out was in the ally so then we went too the ally? we said; oh no. if you want too know what the rest is place read chapter 2 of the run see you next time.

3 comments:

The Nieuwhofs said...

great to see that Dave is back with another story.
Can't wait till the next chapter

Love, DAD

Matt n' Amanda said...

wow Caleb.. you are getting to be such an awesome story. Great work!

Karen Nieuwhof said...

Ooooh.. another story! Awesome! Can't wait to see how this one turns out. It's already filled with mystery.
Love, Tante Karen

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