Where are we Dave? Bob said. Dave said:"A lab or something". "Will we be stuck here?" Bob said "I don't know. Wait, I hear something". It was a muttering. They went closer and it got louder until it was in front of them. It was a police officer, but he was stuck with a rope around him and a bandanna around his mouth. Dave said: "Wait, it may be a trap. What if it's a bandit?" Bob said:"I don't know". They both went closer and fell in a hole and the bandit chief was over the hole and said: "So you fell for it". They were not only stuck, but Bob fell on his phone and it broke. Dave said: "What do we do?" Bob said: "Look a bomb is hanging on the ceiling. We need some sort of metal." So Dave looked around and saw a piece of an old car and pulled it out of the ground and put it over the hole. Bob saw a pistol and got it and shot the bomb once. Dave was very fast so he put the metal over them. The force made the bad guys fall and they were knocked out. Dave put his hands sideways and Bob put his feet on Dave's hands and pushed Bobs foot up to the top. Bob got hold of the top but Dave was still in the hole. So Bob leaned over the side of the hole and Dave grabbed his hands.
End of chapter 3 .
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Thursday, October 30, 2008
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4 comments:
Great story Caleb, can't wait to hear what is going to happen next.
Love MOM
Wow, very professional story. That must have taken you a while to think of. Dave and Bob sure get into interesting and dangerous situation. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Love, DAD.
I love the line "So you fell for it." Funny!
So much excitement... a secret lab... a tied up police officer... bandits...a bomb...so cool!
I'm glad they made it out of the hole. What's next?
wow, your punctuation is getting really great. I love your story it was pretty convienient that there happened to be a pistol in the hole where bob was.
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