Wednesday, October 8, 2008
chapter 2 the run
wen bob and Dave wer in the ally. 10 of the bandits were there so thay called 911. well They wor but thay got them before thay got too call 911. and so thay were tide to a post. and left them. so someone freed them thay wer rubbing of there clothing wen. thay lookd up no one was there so then thay ran out of the ally. thay seen that guy so thay ran after him. so then around the coner thay went. just wen that were around the corner no one was. there thay gave up so thay calld a taxi went too the 911 base. thay told them what happened so thay sent 7 of there men too go there. then bob and dave went to thare homes. the next day 911 called and sayd come too the ally. theres some thing you should see so bob told dave and thay both went there.so wen thay got there the headpolice sayd.your here.bob sayd yes now what is it you want to show us.well 1 of r police sat down on a stone chair but it was not just a chair there was a button on it.ya so. ya so that means there is a secret passege.o i get it thay went down i big tube wen thay pressd it but then thay sasyd wow.end of chapter 2 the run wait for chapter 3 the older undergrund base
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5 comments:
Oh, that sounds dangerous. Hope Bob and Dave get to catch all the bad guys.
Love, DAD
scary... looks like Bob is in for a big adventure... Im glad I am not him and i am safe.
Wow. A secret passage. I wonder what is down there. Please keep Dave and Bob safe. I hope 911 goes with them.
Wow. Another exciting adventure! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens to Bob and Dave this time.
Love you!
~ Mary
Im really excited that you are writing another story! I like the adventures of Bob and Dave. You are doing a really good job, keeping us in supense, and wondering what will happen next. I wonder where the secret passage is going to lead to? maybe an underground incan city, or a cave with lots of treasures! I cant wait to find out!!
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