Well Bob and Dave went to 911 and got some help to get the bad guys
so Bob and Dave and 911 went thare secret lair and it was at the
trian yard so thae took and 911 truck and went to the trin yard and the to bad guys
were on gard so they put them in a sack like they did to Bob
and too 911 guys took them to base and you remember that thae were robots right
and destroyed them and the wire broke and the metel rolled around
and they died and the too 911 guys went back to the trian yard
and they broke in to the lair and the bad guy was there farther in the lair
so some more robots came and tried to stop Bob and Dave but the 911 guys destroyed
the robots and then Bob and Dave went to the bad guy and Bob got him and Dave
got the other side and so the presedint gave Bob and Dave both 1 gold metel
each for there braveness and a lifetime supplie of food.
the end
7 comments:
Wow, that was a good ending. I especially like the part where you describe the robots falling apart and metal rolling around. I can just picture it. So, are you going to write it in a book and draw pictures for it? That would be so cool. Anyway, it's supper time. Talk to you later. Love Mary
That was a great story Caleb. I really enjoyed reading it. It was always exciting to see a new chapter. Bob and Dave were really brave. It was a good thing they got a medal for bravery. I hope you enjoyed writing your story. And hope that we will here some more from you.
Love, DAD
Oh my! What a good ending. Very exciting with the robots getting destroyed. I'm glad the president was proud of Bob and Dave. They deserved the medal and the lifetime supply of food (lucky them).
You're a great story teller Caleb. I look forward to future stories from you.
Love, Tante Karen
Maybe we could have a sleep over?? C ya latter Andrew
That's a great ending....I like that it was a happy one!!! Bob and Dave sure make a good team, and you can always count on those 911 guys!
See you soon, love Tante Tetcy
I loved the ending. I cant wait to see the book with all the pictures in it. I am going to come and visit you next week . I love you and cant wait. You should write a new story. Love YOU!
Amanda
wow, I negver expected uit to end that way! That was pretty sneaky! Ihope that you are going to writ another book! i really liked reading that one! Love Dianna
by the weay i am glad that they got rewared for their bravery and that the president gave them a gold medal, 0and a life time supply of food, i wish i had a lifetime supplyof food! Then id never have to go grocery shopping again!!! 8)
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