Well Bob went home and calld 911 and the to so 911 went to the crash
and thare was a nothing in the trin so 911 went back to base
and thae erestid Bob and than Bob calld to them i did not do eny thing
i did nothing at all and Bob had to tell tham that he nidint
do it well a guy came and onlockt the door for Bob
and wen Bob was going to sae thangkx but thare was onloe a shado
so he went throo the door end of chapter8.
5 comments:
hmmm... this is getting interesting. I wonder what the shadow is that keeps saving bob. You should print out the story and draw some pictures and make a real life book that kids could read. I love your story. It is so super. I love you!
hmmm. this book is getting good! I wondewr who the shadow guy is?? I cant wait to read chapter nine!! Im so excited! I agree with amanda you should draw some pictures and then publish your book! Love you lots! DIanna
Great story. Glad that Bob is OK. I wonder what will happen next. It is kind of strange with that shadow. What will Bob get into next?
Love you, DAD
Wow 2 more chapters!!! I love the idea of a shadow guy. That's soooo mysterious! I didn't think he would get in so much trouble for calling 911, I thought they would help him!I'm glad Bob got out of this jam...
Great story and it keeps getting better...love ya, Tante Tetcy
What a mystery. Who could this mystery man be and why is he helping Bob? Well, I'm glad someone is being nice to poor old Bob. He needs a friend.
Your sisters have a good idea -- pictures would be great. Do you want to be an author Caleb?
Til next time, Tante Karen and Omke Marten
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