Wednesday, January 23, 2008

chapter 5

Well I no that you all wont too see chapter 5 you will I and I hope you like it
Well the 2 guys busted the door the door broke and Bob finely seen what the
They had in Thar hands it was a shack and they kidnapped Bob and took him too a Factory and kept him Thar.end uv chapter 5

8 comments:

Karen Nieuwhof said...

How terrible. Poor Bob. What do the kidnappers want? Money? I hope the police find him.

Keep writing. You are great!
Tante Karen

Tineke Aaron and Cassie said...

I sure hope Bob's going to be alright.
Great story Caleb!
You sure keep us in suspense.
Love Tante Tineke

Matt n Amanda said...

OH NO! They took Bob? Did he have something that they wanted. Man, I hope he doesnt get hurt. I always think it is sad when they get hurt. hope you had a good day! I had a great one!
Love Amanda

The Nieuwhofs said...

I sure hope that they don't hurt Bob. Do the police know about the factory?
I hope they find him soon.
Love, DAD

Dianna said...

Poor Bob!! Im hanging on a cliff! What is going to happen next? What are the kidnappers going to do with that poor guy? Why did they take him?? I hope I get to find out tommorow!!What are they hideing at the factory?? Cant wait to find out! Love, Dianna

P.S. You are doing a really good job with your typing skills, keep up the good work! :)

Mary and Isaac said...

Yikes! Bob was kidnapped? I think the police should hire a detective to find Bob. Where is the warehouse? What else is in the warehouse? How many Bad guys are there? I hope Bob is ok. I can't wait til chapter 6!
I love you and miss you lots Kapie!
Love,
~ Mary

sugarnuggets said...

Oh I love Chapter 5!! It is getting more exciting with every chapter.
I can't believe they broke the door!! I hope Bob will be okay. I hope you write more on your great story soon!
Way to go....love ya, Tante Tetcy

The Nieuwhofs said...

I want chapter six, why is it taking so long? Please?

Love, DAD

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